Wow, its pretty damn good
What I liked: the choir sound made the song for me, brilliant,
the sound design is simple harmor stuff but you made it work, which is very cool, i like how you made some good old yoys in harmor too, good job, the funky pattern you introduced at the start and back in at the end is amazing, very nice job
You could however work on: distortion is a big problem in your music, it kinda bitcrushes itself whenever anything epic is happening, do you put a fruity limiter on the master? I reccomend doing that if not, the other thing is that in your last 5 or 6 or even 7 songs you have used the same off tempo and off pitch riser/faller sound and that spoiled it more than anything else,
but again good job, thank you for reading :)